Day 30 - Over, Yet Not Over

Zokutou word meter
60,054 / 60,000
(100.1%)

So I’ve reached my goal!

Actually, I didn’t write at all yesterday (I drew instead. Lovely vector software of mine), but I pumped up a nice little scene, and the 2402 words I added to the counter to reach the 60k, in the train taking me back home at the end of the afternoon. Not bad, for a 55-minutes long trip + waiting for the train to depart, proof that when I want to write, boy, I can do that fast! This also allowed me to finish one of my uncompleted chapters, hence why I’m so glad about it.

Nothing’s over yet, though. December will allow me to work on the details some more. I guess that if I can end with a ~80k novel by New Year, I’ll still have completed a “normal-length” novel in, what, two months? And if only for that, it’ll be a matter of pride to me.

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As Promised, The Word Count…

Zokutou word meterZokutou word meter
57,652 / 60,000
(96.1%)

I knew there wasn’t any need to stress.

I’ve focused on a few other things, and all of a sudden, the words to write one of the remaining scenes took shape in my mind all by themselves. Not sweating over it seems to work well enough for this week-end, even if I likely won’t pull out 8,000 words like I did the past one.

On the 30th, I’ll have 1h30 to kill in the train… I’m sure I’ll write more by then anyway.

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Day 25, Day 26 - Oy…

Alright, I suppose I could and should have worked on my story more these past two days. I know where I’m going with it, I even have two more “action” scenes to write, it’s not like I don’t have anything to look forward to, but… let’s say my attention was focused on a few other things. Cleaning, for once, since there’s still a crapload of… well, crap to take out of the cellar (and the cellar is HUGE). Second, I made the “mistake” of beginning to read Richard Dawkins’ “The Ancestor’s Tale”, and drats, this book is interesting! Not the easiest thing to read in English, thus it takes me more time than with a regular book, but interesting nevertheless. Third, I really wanted to tinker with the layout, options and first posts on Vectorized, because I’ve waited to start this project for weeks, and now that I have the domain name at last, there was no way I could wait any longer. I can be an impatient little fellow.

So for the past two days, I’m totalling a meager… 1000 words. Probably better than what I’ve done in past days, during these four years I had basically taken an extended break from writing seriously, yet it’s still a little crappy in my book. I think I’m going to go on taking it easy today; these interesting scenes to write will come more easily if I don’t stress over them for the five or six upcoming hours, and I don’t care if I write 100 words here and 200 words there, what matters is that I write them.

Word count to be update later on, since it’s only 5 pm, after all.

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Day 24 - Numb, But Going On

Zokutou word meterZokutou word meter
55,872 / 60,000
(93.1%)

Numb from cold, that is. Since our wood stove decided to pull a suicide-bomber on us and let its glass door explose last Sunday, we’ve basically been running on two mini-electric heaters. For a house with six rooms and two stories, it’s just not enough at all. I’m not completely dead and frozen, but it gets hard to focus at times when I keep on wondering if we’ll have some kind of heating system again before Christmas. Then the laptop told me that its network card had gone ballistics; given that I’ll need it next week to bring at the office, I’m a tad bit unnerved. No need to say my motivation is, err, not great, buuuut at least I’ve completed one of the unfinished chapters. Going slowly, but going.

I’m wondering, too, if I shouldn’t up the previsional post count to 70,000, but I’m too tired to think of this properly now. I’ll reach 60k, and then I’ll decide what to envision.

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Excerpt - To Chase The Devil

[This excerpt is just a little bit longer than the previous ones. This is the first conversation between Deanna and Chen that appears in the novel. The man they're talking about is in fact Heiji, whose old code name was 'Akuma'—hence the title. As for Chen... I swear, this man would give me the creeps as well...]

The face that appeared on the large screen was no one else’s than Eric Chen’s, looking as alert as ever, his dark eyes gleaming with a satisfaction he didn’t even try to conceal. It sure wasn’t the expression she had expected to see him; in fact, she didn’t expect him to contact her that fast.

“Good evening, Deanna”, he started without even letting her the time to greet him.

“…Mr. Chen”, she nodded, quickly putting on a neutral expression to not show him that he had somewhat taken her aback.

Eric Chen, on the private Syzygy channel, past midnight, barely one hour after she had sent her report? Not good. Not good at all. That the man in charge of all the operations of the Townsend on the colony was to call her in such a way, himself still in his working clothes, denoted that she had struck the right chord, yet oddly enough, she wasn’t feeling very happy with this idea. Chen had always frightened her, sometimes more than just a little, although she wouldn’t admit it to anyone; he pulled strings that herself had never been able to discover, and working for him didn’t mean that she liked what the man had in mind most of the time. It was a blessing to not be in the Syrtis branch of the company, else she’d likely had turned crazy by now.

“I’ve finished reading your report. An eventful day, isn’t it.”

The alarm bells set off at once in her mind; when the conversation started on the bantering tone, it always meant she wasn’t going to like its outcome.

“Yes, Sir”, she answered, making sure that her voice wasn’t going to waver even once during this exchange. “We’re getting things back in control. Tomorrow, it’ll be over. I don’t think there’s anything to really worry about.”

“There is, my dear. For that matter, there is. But I know you’re doing what’s needed. What I want to talk about first is this recording of… what’s her name? The girl. McAran, that’s it.” He snapped his fingers in a casual move — another sign that she wasn’t going to like this call.

Deanna nodded in silence, placing her arms behind her back in a stance that much looked like the one she had been used to, back when she was a low-level Agent. Forcing herself to not fidget with whatever she had under the hand demanded her more focus than she would have thought. Chen’s presence always had this effect on her, she didn’t know why; one of the descendants of the Sino-American settlers who had come to Mars in the middle of the 22nd century, the man didn’t have anything special to his looks, with his regular features and neatly cut slick black hair, except perhaps this self-confidence that appeared in every of his gestures. A shark in a lion’s disguise, old Laraby once had said. He had climbed the complex, stiff hierarchy ladder of the Corporation that fast in barely twelve years; this was a sure sign that he knew what he wanted, and knew how to obtain it, whatever the means involved.

“McAran, yes”, Deanna said, her mouth dry. “The hacker.”

“Not much data available on her, right? They have such a way of covering their tracks, these little rats.”

“Jen McAran seems to be quite a talented one, indeed. Too bad she’s on the wrong side.”

She swallowed hard. She already knew what was to follow, and Chen seemed to have read her mind, for she clearly noticed the calculating smile at the corner of his lips, right before he went on:

“The man’s interesting, too. Much more interesting.”

“Yes, Sir.”

“We both know it’s him, right, Deanna?”

“Yes, Sir.”

“And all this time, we thought he had died in Syrtis. I’m not sure if this is a good or a bad surprise. If Laraby was still alive, I’d make an example with him, just for having not finished the job.”

For a second, only a second, Deanna closed her eyes. A part of herself wished she never had found this document, had never gone on Juno Street to question the reporters and lay her hands on their recording; the other part knew that had she dared to dissimulate this to Chen, her situation would have sooner or later turned for the worst. She couldn’t afford to be in the spotlight, not when it came to Eric Chen, not when they both knew she stood in the palm of his hand.

“I want him dead, Deanna. For good. No supposing and believing.”

The Security Chief opened her eyes again, staring at the screen, and nodded, unable to acknowledge the order in a loud voice.

“I don’t care what means you need to use, I want this man. I want to know how he managed to escape. How he fooled us for so long.”

“So you want him taken… alive?”

“Alive, yes. I want to see the look on his face when he realizes his life is between my hands. He’ll understand. And then, he’ll die.”

“I’ll do my best, Sir.”

“Of course, you’ll do. You don’t have the choice.”

His smile had vanished all of a sudden, his voice taken on a threatening tone. Again, Deanna nodded in silence, the barely veiled threat still echoing in her ears. Stay in your place. She kept on repeating the old motto in her mind, aware that slipping only once would mean her death too. There was another rule, an unspoken one — once an Agent, always an Agent. Trying to get out could only be done through one, unique door.

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