2006 NaNovel Profiling

I’m going to reuse here the “novel profiling sheet” I had gathered for NaNo 2005; it was posted on the sci-fi forum, but I doubt one would absolutely need to write sci-fi to be able to summarize her NaNovel with this sheet. Little tweaks here and there were enough to turn it into an appropriate one.

Novel Title: Over Yonder / The Price to Pay (can’t decide at the moment, although Over Yonder seems to stick to me more)
Estimated length: 50k at the very least, of course.
Your writing experience: Short stories (a few published in fanzines), blog articles, technical manuals (it is writing!), the huge project of creating a whole world to host the Wall of Silence trilogy I’ve been working on, and, of course, NaNo 2005!
New genre? Or old favorite?: Fantasy. Both new genre and old favorite. I generally like fantasy, but so far all my attempts at writing it have turned to sci-fi, or at the least science-fantasy.
Any sub-Genres?: Magic Realism, combined to High Fantasy.
Gonna publish?: Who knows! This year again, it’ll all depend on the final first draft, and if I deem it worth editing.
Cliches/archetypes you’re including (not necessarily a bad thing!): Mages. Battlefields. Love story. Sword fights.
Cliches/archetypes you’re avoiding: Quest to save the world. Prophecy. Heroes travelling during a good chunk of the novel. Dragons.
Theme(s): Coming of age. Young love blossoming. What it takes to become a mage.
What we (the readers) will learn: That there’s a price to pay for everything, especially for the highest powers. That what one does for the good of the nation may very well become what will cause its doom. That abusing magic will only result in the sacrifice of one’s loved ones.
Main character(s): Althea, Idan, Lady Amaryllis.
Secondary characters: The Archmage, Taran, King Aubrey.
Protagonist(s): Althea, Idan.
Antagonist(s): Magic itself. War in general. The King and his mad goals, to a lesser extent.
Setting: (names undecided yet) An imaginary world… it hasn’t yet come back to me to reveal me more about how it’s shaped! All I know is that I’m going to name all my cities and villages Providence, Mercy, Perdition, and stuff like that. I just happen to like it–at the moment. Maybe this will change by November. I’m also fiddling with the idea of having it be a cursed world, cursed by the Gods perhaps, and condemned to reenact the same conflicts over and over.
Rough geography: Focus placed on two countries at war, and more specifically on Providence, the capital of one of them, harbouring an Academy of magics where the heroine will be sent.
Races/inhabitants: Humans. Mostly. If there’s something else in it, I’m not sure I’m going to make much use of it anyway. Perhaps only as legends and old folkstales.
Fantasy aspects: Medieval-like setting. Magic (and magic duels and fights). Brutal wars and cunning rulers. Curses. Ancient, absent, half-forgotten Gods.
Conflict: The heroine vs. those who want to mold her into their views. Impossible and condemned love. Hurting the one she loves–the more the love, the more the hurt.
Obstacles in the journey: An odd curse hitting people and causing them to go ‘over yonder’, meaning losing their minds (emotions and memories, and finally the sheer will to live). The old rule of the mages to never get involved in relationships. The ongoing war that won’t seem to stop.
Expected resolution: Nothing good can get out of this. I’m not sure yet of whom I’ll kill, but I’m toying with the idea that there are fates worse than death, and going ‘over yonder’ is one of them, at least for the victim’s relatives. Althea will find her answers, but to get them, she’ll have to pay the price first. Again, it’s not a nice price.

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9 Responses to “2006 NaNovel Profiling”

  1. Anna Says:

    I like this worksheet. I’ll tweak out a copy for myself, and use it.

  2. Yzabel Says:

    I hope it’ll be as useful to you as it’s been to me! I can’t remember anymore who had posted the original topic in the sci-fi forum last year, so no credit given. On the other hand, I bet this ‘original’ topic (or a very similar one) had been posted to death over the previous years anyway, so it doesn’t matter much anymore. ;)

  3. hazel8500 Says:

    Yes, thank you! This outline is very helpful, I may use it too.

    Good Luck & have lots of fun!
    Hazel.

  4. hazel8500 Says:

    Yzabel, used your outline technique last night, thanks so much it really helped me clarify a few things, and showed me what I really need to concentrate on.

  5. uta tulu Says:

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  6. “Novel Profiling” « Totally Nude Vodka Fumes Says:

    [...] Totally grabbed this from this fabulous blog over here- so hope that’s cool. It’s for a sci-fi novel but I can adjust. Nanowrimo is comin and it ain’t lookin good for me. I’m trying to write a thank-you note right now and it is so not happening it actually is funny. Novel Title: Hello Adam Estimated length: Ha ha ha. Your writing experience: Whosis? New genre? Or old favorite?: Realistic ficshin. Any sub-Genres?: Wacky trippy road trippin. Gonna publish?: Ha ha ha. And then some Columbia alum will be like Bitch stole my plot and shitty syntax! Cliches/archetypes you’re including (not necessarily a bad thing!): Road trip. Misunderstood young peoples. Insanity. Music. Sex drugs an rock’n’roll. And stuff. Cliches/archetypes you’re avoiding: There’s nothing we won’t not do man. Theme(s): The whole punk conception of romance. Movement. What we (the readers) will learn: Passion is a fashion but some of us are stuck with one pair of jeans and it innint our fault. Reality ain’t shit. Moving is for what ails ya. Main character(s): Adam. Secondary characters: The Virgin fuckin Mary, Topper Headon, an an an- the hitchhiker guy and his posse. And Donny, Catalina, and the unnamed chick. Protagonist(s): Adam. Antagonist(s): Everyone else! Setting: The highway between Los Angeles and some town in New Mexico that I made up. Rough geography: That would be desert then? And asphalt. Conflict: Adam’s gotta get somewhere in a certain amount of time. No biggie. Obstacles in the journey: He’s in a stolen car, doesn’t have money, and is having trouble seeing things. Expected resolution: Oh dude, I totally wanna kill someone off. [...]

  7. sickboycomagirl Says:

    Oh dude, sorry about that huge thing up there– is there any way to turn that monster ping off? Anyway, fantastic profile format, had a lot of fun doing it! Thanks!

  8. Yzabel Says:

    Not sure about the ping thing, I think I’ve allowed pingbacks, but probably it can be turned on or off from your side as well on each post? Anyway, I don’t mind. As long as this profiling thing is useful to someone, it’s good. :)


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